Chronologically, this piece of the story takes place before Honey leaves town.
"No more arguing, Carrie. You need help with Emily." Henry leaned back in his chair, tapping a pen against his hand, and studied his friend and employee. She looked tired. "Have you heard from Todd?"
"Yeah," Carrie shifted in her seat. "He says he's sorry and wants to come home."
Henry's mouth tightened. He had received a similar call after he'd sent Todd's final paycheck over to his parents' place. "What are you going to do?" he asked neutrally.
"I can't trust him, Henry. I just can't."
"I know."
"At the same time," tears welled in Carrie's eyes, "he's Emily's father..." she trailed off, staring at her fingers as she twisted them in her lap.
"Are you sleeping okay?"
"Who sleeps with a baby in the house," Carrie said wryly.
"Which is why I want to hire a nanny."
"That's not your responsibility."
"Yes. It is. With the summer season coming up, we're going to be busier than ever. We're already booked through July, and August is nearly full. I need you. Think of it as employer run daycare."
"You pay me well enough to find someone to watch Emily when she can't come here to the house."
Henry narrowed his eyes, "I don't pay you well enough to have a live-in nanny."
"Then give me a raise."
"Damn it, Carrie!"
"I know what you're doing. You're not looking for someone to watch just Emily."
"I'm," Henry tossed his pen on the desk and sighed. "I'm worried. It's not like you to give up, and when Frank and I found you --"
"Oh for God's sake," Carrie groused. "That was two weeks ago! Let it go. I'm doing a lot better."
Henry stared out the window for a moment. He hadn't wanted to use this. "Would you do it for me? For Ellie?" He looked back at Carrie. "You know she's worried." He didn't mention the debt Carrie owed her. She knew.
Carrie sighed softly, slumping in defeat. "Fine."
"Great," Henry leaned forward and opened a drawer. He pulled out a folder and slid it across the desk. "Here are the three finalists. I've already run background and reference checks and conducted two interviews." He held up his hand, "Don't worry. I know what questions to ask a nanny. I Googled."
Carrie snorted. "Do you always get what you want?"
"Almost," Henry grinned as Carrie rolled her eyes.
Carrie studied the three applications, a color photo neatly attached to each one. "Her."
"She's the first you want to interview?"
"No. She's the one I want to hire."
"Don't you want to talk to all three?"
"No," Carrie said decisively.
"Why her?"
Carrie shook her head. Standing up, she started to leave. At the door she paused, staring at her hand on the door knob. "She's the only one of the three who is not drop dead gorgeous. There's no way in hell I'm having a beautiful nanny in the house if..." sighing, she walked out the door.
Henry sat silently for a moment. "I guess he's coming back." Picking up the phone, he started to dial.
This was a piece of fiction based on the Red Dress Club prompt: Write a scene in which a physically beautiful character is somehow impacted by that trait.
The nanny is a very tiny part of this post, but her apparent lack of beauty is what opened this door and closed the door for the other two candidates.
Again, this story takes place before Honey leaves town. And it looks like Todd is coming back.
If you want to read more about these characters, visit Fictional Mandyland.
35 comments:
The dialogue here has a ring of truth to it. Fiction frightens me because I am afraid it will feel contrived, but yours feels real.
LOVE how you developed this, girl!
And the karate chop line at the end? Perfection!
Totally got where you were going with this without the disclosure after the post! I am just loving this story!
I remembered the post that leads into this, which I also thoroughly enjoyed! And really...what woman in her right mind would hire a beautiful nanny? LOL
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I really like Henry. I'm not sure how I feel about Carrie. Hmmmm. I need to read some more before I make up my mind :)
Go back and read. Poor Carrie's been through the wringer. Don't worry, though. I have every hope she'll be okay. Eventually. ;)
Especially with a husband like Todd!
I wasn't sure if I should add a "dumdumDUM" when I mentioned that Todd was coming back. lol
I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
Thank you. I've been working on it for a little while. :)
Ugh. Todd sucks.
It's revealing that her mind is still on protecting Todd....from himself. The baby will be okay, but she is focusing on keeping Todd away from...distractions.
Not to say she's not a good mom. She just is accepting marriage to a cad.
Love this series.
ROFL - the company I work for publishes an anthology of short stories written by students (k-12). The kids LOVE to write dum-dum-DUUUUM when something dramatic or scary happens. It totally cracks us up! (They are also fond of the evil laugh: Muah-ha-ha-ha)
Very nice! I need to catch up on the rest of the story now!
I feel so bad for Carrie. She has a great support group. She doesn't need that ass Todd.
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Loved the Googled line, it was a perfect moment of lightness in an otherwise heavy and uncomfortable scene/conversation.
I thought this did a great job of highlighting the near impossibility of Carrie's situation. The space between really loving someone, and really hating them for something that they have done is an awful place to be, and I for one am finding it refreshing to read a character who isn't navigating those waters with any particular grace. Being a brand new mother as well as a scorned wife, and not just a 'Hey, I got drunk one night honey, oops way." Scared by money issues and overall having her entire life spin out of control is creating a perspective that is slightly hard to read for me. I both want to come over and clean her house and tell her to pull her s*&t together and kick Todd in the balls and out of her life. But I can see why she is making the decisions she is, and it is interesting because it makes her both fragile and strong willed.
Ok, enough blathering from me. Awesome as always!
I'm so drawn into this story. Seriously, your character development is fantastic.
Mandy, I love how much you've invested in each of your characters, that this isn't just a story about Ellie And Henry. Your characters aren't flat, aren't used as pawns to move the story along. LOVE THEM with their individual quirks and flaws.
Also, I need a Henry, feeling a little like Carrie over here (w/out the scoundrel Todd, of course.) Whoever said "sleep when the baby sleeps, must have had a nanny, chef, and housekeeper.
You pulled a me here, using the prompt entirely for your own devices. Hee!
This one was all Henry. Smooth, organized, confident, hot... wait... fictional.
Sigh.
I really enjoyed this. I know I have read more about them, but right now I am blanking on it all and just looking at this as its own piece and it's fantastic. Great transitions between their two mindsets and letting us know what he is doing for her. Before he mentions Ellie I have other thoughts in mind for these two ... but he is so caring and tender, and I like him a lot, so I couldn't help myself and I went there. ;) Off to refresh my memory.
Poor Carrie. Nothing like being hormonal, sleep-deprived AND having a cheating man.
I really liked this use of the prompt, btw!
I read this and just realized I NEVER told you how much I loved it, in fact at dinner on Sat, I was actually telling my SIL how much I want to write like you. :)
this is a perfect representation of "how physical beauty" affects us. It was "just right" ;)
Oooo! I need to do an evil laugh!
She really isn't thinking straight. She's so worried about keeping her family together she can't see that this is now where she wants and needs to be.
Thanks! Go. Read. lol
She doesn't, but she also doesn't realize how many people love her. She's so caught up in Todd's issues.
God, I love your comments.
I don't think she realizes how strong she is. I also don't think she realizes how much she's clinging to something that doesn't exist.
You poor thing! I wish I could come over and clean your house and cook you dinner. Of course, odds are you'd end up with food poisoning, but still!
Don't you hate it when the perfect men are fictional?
They're just really good friends. :)
Seriously. All three?! That sucks on a totally different level.
We'll see...
That is so sweet! Thank you. :)
So, do you have all these characters mapped out in your head or do you have some sort of timeline and/or character profile written down? With every little story, I'm always wanting to know more about each of them. Really liked how the beauty fit in here, not as a focal point, but pivotal, nonetheless. And I'm still dying to know what's in that envelope! :>
Would you be disillusioned if I tell you that I have a grain of an idea and then...they just kind of show up?
It started with Henry and Ellie and then...Todd and Carrie leaving Vegas and then, somehow, Honey clicked her way into my head.
And there's someone else. I've known about him for a long time, but I wasn't sure when he'd clear his throat and move to the front of the line.
Okay. That all sounded weird. I've tried mapping out characters with other pieces. I've tried doing timelines. I read that JK Rowlings did both and since I want to be a real, live author, I figured I needed to do the same.
But, it never works for me. I have to just let it all free flow.
Don't do it Carrie! Don't let that scum back in the house!!
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