They loved.
She ran through the doorways, her tiny feet slapping against
the wood floors. Her hair stood on end, tufts of chick down swaying as she darted
away from her mother who begged her to slow down as she waddled in pursuit. Her
father watched with a small smile on his face. The little girl paused in the
wide entry way with a look in her deep blue eyes that warned the chase was far
from over. Her mother’s hand rested on the white trim. The house supported her
for a moment until the game resumed.
They grew.
His screams bounced off the ceiling. His mother pleaded, her
pinched forehead and dark rimmed eyes brimming with tears. His cries continued,
filling the house until nothing else remained. His father put his hand on her
shoulder. She shrugged away his touch. He screamed louder. His father took him
from his mother and instantly, he quieted. His small brown eyes closed, his
breaths came in great gulps and hiccups as he fell into a deep sleep. His
mother slumped to the floor, the bare wood softening to cradle her.
They struggled.
They sat next to each other on cushions padded with age. His
arm wrapped around her while she looked at him with eyes that had faded in time.
“They still match the walls,” he whispered against her lips. She sighed and
looked out the window as their past and their future walked up the drive. The
house sighed and creaked as it shifted with her.
They lived.
She sat next to him, holding his hand and whispered words of
regret. He rasped words of comfort as the breath in his chest rattled.
Candlelight sank into the blue walls until the flickering flames failed to
penetrate the darkness pressing around them. From the doorway two pairs of eyes
looked on. They leaned against the faded blue walls creased with a highway of
cracks.
They lost.
The house was silent as the ghosts whispered like sand in
the wind.
This is a little one off based on the Write on Edge prompt this week. The photos in this series were so hauntingly beautiful, I wanted to make sure I submitted a piece.
This is a little one off based on the Write on Edge prompt this week. The photos in this series were so hauntingly beautiful, I wanted to make sure I submitted a piece. 
10 comments:
Girl, I love how you tell a story.
More please!
Also, where are all these endearing men you write about?
Sigh. Your words, Mandy. Amazing descriptions, and I love the role the house plays in the story of their lives.
(One little typo in "They say next to each other...")
No friggin' clue, but I keep hoping if I keep writing them, I might manifest one. Doesn't hurt to try!
Thank you! This picture really sparked my imagination. I couldn't wait to type something about a house with walls of blue.
(Typo fixed. Thanks.)
Oh my goodness...I love this. How beautiful!
An entire lifetime through the doors of that sand-soaked house... wow, Mandy.
Glorious tale - clever and finely crafted.
Oh, this is beautiful! I can see the house absorbing all the memories of love and life.
You are amazing!
I love this. I haven't been able to come up with anything worthwhile for the prompt.
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