"I want to see you too," I sighed, taking a sip of the crisp Chardonnay. "Come to California, Henry."
"I want to, sweetheart. I do. This is a busy time at Hidden Hollow. I'm in the middle of interviews for a chef to take over while mine is on maternity leave." The phone was silent for a moment. "You can come here, Ellie."
"I have work too."
"When's your spring break?"
"In two weeks."
"Come to Montana," he urged.
"Henry," I started.
"I'm buying you a ticket. You can use it or not, but I'm hoping you do."
I shifted down on the couch. "I don't want you to pay for my ticket," I protested.
"I can afford it and I know you can't. They don't pay teachers enough," he replied stubbornly. I closed my eyes and pictured his square chin with the tiny cleft. God, I wanted to kiss that chin.
"You know," I sighed, "that's not playing fair. I miss you."
"I miss you too, Ellie. God, I would love to come to California right now."
"Right now?"
"I want to lay California out in front of me and explore every peak and valley. I want to run my fingers through Sonoma and Napa. I want to wrap my hands around San Diego and Palm Springs and run them up to Long Beach."
My heart thudded as his raspy voice continued.
"I'd spend a long time in Long Beach," his voice dropped to a whisper. "A really long time."
"Really?" I squeaked.
"Mmm-hmm. I want to nibble my way down Santa Clara and expose San Francisco and Oakland. Twin cities."
"Um," I swallowed, "they don't really like to be called that."
"I want to lick my way around Monterey and San Luis Obispo while my hands stroked up towards Santa Barbara."
I shifted on the couch, warmth pooling in my stomach. "Henry."
"I love Santa Barbara. Do you know where I'd go next?"
"Yosemite?"
"That's a good possibility. I'd stroke Yosemite until I melted all the ice and it was as hot as the desert."
"Henry?" I whispered.
"Yeah?" Henry replied thickly.
"I'm not sure I like what this will make Fresno."
Henry's surprised laugh barked through the phone. "Montana. Two weeks."
"I'll be there."
This is a piece of fiction inspired by the Red Dress Club prompt: to write about sex without writing about the actual act. Because you always want to leave a little to the imagination.This bit takes place before Ellie visits Montana which puts it right at the
beginning of the story. You have to love Henry's imagination. Yum.
For more Hidden Hollow, read Fictional Mandyland and catch up.
27 comments:
I'm speechless. This was amazing. And HOT! Bravo woman, bravo.
mmmhmmm... oh Henry, you devil.
I will be your California any time.
OMG...never have a had such a sexy geography lesson.
Yowza!
Holy. OMG I need to shift in my seat. I love the naughty, the want, the tease of this, it was the hottest geography lesson I've ever had. Whew!
So hot!! You have definitely read a few romance novels in your day. ;)
HOT!!!! Loved it! :)
Holy crap! This was fantastic! Quite possibly the hottest piece of writing I have read this week. What a fantastic way to bring the tease of the heat into play, and these characters, who we already love so much. Her resistance, her wavering, giving in to his voice, his words. Love it - love it - love it!
Oh me, oh my. No wonder Ellie hopped on a plane to see Henry!
I knew you'd tackle this in a unique way. Though, now I think my runs into San Francisco & Oakland, trips down south, and the next camping run to Yosemite will all have new connotations to them! ;>
This story was rockin!
Too clever, my friend.
I want to take a geography course with Henry, please.
Also, this reminds me of a piece I did about SF a while back. But I think I may like yours just a wee bit more.
Okay, a steamy, can't get enough,more.
Smarty pants! You did a tremendous job with this one---love the geography/phone sex!
And I'm envious of your ease and talent with dialogue. that's something i need to work on.
Dialogue has always been easier for me than narrative. I wish I was better at that. My stories tend to sound like scripts. :)
Oooh...link your SF post!!
Thanks!!
Seriously, would you even wait two weeks? I'd suddenly find myself calling in sick. ;)
Yay! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks!
Just a few. ;)
Doesn't Henry just make you sigh with lust?
LOL...thanks!
Thanks for the pre-read, lady. :)
Thank you!
Cute,, clever, and steamy! *Love!*
And that ending? Perfection!
This was fabulous, creative, and HOT! Who knew geography could be so steamy :-)
Very! Well! Done! Brilliant take on the prompt. You had me smiling AND fanning myself at the same time. :)
Hee! Love this! I love the rapport between the two and the idea was so clever. Fresno! HA!
Oh this was gorgeous! You're an artist, Mandy! The imagery was wonderful, and lucious, and delightfully dirty! I wish I was more familiar with the geography of California, though. I caught the innuendos, of course, but I was questioning whether the locations of each correlated to specific...areas..relative to their distance from each other on the map and the body. I'll just pull a map and re-read it!
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