I've written about my dad before.
I've written about how he's the salt of the earth.
I've written about how he's not, technically speaking, my dad.
But...I haven't written about the swings.
My parents were nomadic while I was growing up, moving from house to house and town to town, halfway across the country and back. Every time we moved, Dad walked into the yard and sized up a tree for a Swing.
These swings were not simple rope and wood concoctions. They were masterpieces. Some of them sat all three of us older girls in a row. Others were smaller, forcing us to take turns. We waited eagerly for Dad to come push us.
He didn't give us a safe little push. He swung us high into the trees until, with our heads hanging back, our mouths opened in screams of delight, our toes stretching, until we could almost touch the branches overhead.
"Higher!" We yelled. And he pushed us higher. Higher than conventional swing sets allowed. Higher until we felt the ropes in our hands go slack and the quick jerk of the swing falling back.
In Dad's swings, we took flight.
Happy birthday, Dad. I'm so glad that you're still making swings so my babies can fly.
20 comments:
Oh my gosh what a sweet, sweet post. I love this. Happy Birthday to your dad, will he be visiting like Maxine does? Hi, Maxine *waving*.
Hope your father has a great day - he sounds like a super dude.
Oh geez, I have a lump in my throat! Happy Birthday to your dad!
So sweet. Happy birthday to him. :-)
Oh sweet, Happy birthday!
I love the way your describe the slack rope and the jerk of gravity.
My Dad would push like that!
Hi, Jessica *waving back* and LMAO too. Mandy's dad isn't a technical type of guy...he is your John Wayne characters type. He sits on the couch and I read him everyones posts or I print them out for him to read. He is a very proud papa though. But he saids thanks a bunch for all the B-day responses..I would say it the way he does, but you wouldn't understand his English..it is something to the effect..Thankee ;O) And trust me his stories of his life are something out of a Mark Twain or Where the Red Ferns Grow type.
Love this. Nothing like a push from Dad.
Happiest birthday wishes Mandy's Dad!!
This was really moving. Thanks for sharing this part of your childhood. (PS- Your dad is kind of hot. Am I so inappropriate or what?!)
LOL No...he was (and still is) such a charmer. There's a picture of him from high school that has "heart breaker" written all over it. :)
They push the highest! :)
Dads rock when it comes to pushing the swing. Moms try to keep it safe.
Morgan, I take that as a compliment..and Mandy is right, he is a southern boy who knew how to charm and still does. ;O)
I couldn't find the comment thing for the water piece So here it goes:
What a “raine” story! Fiction or on fiction – it has the marks of real. It drives you to the end – which of course(sneaky you evading the word limit like that) is in part two. {smile}
“her short cap of dark hair plastered to her head.” – it’s lines like that which make it authentic. That’s exactly what it would look like – gives it the ring or real.
God Bless and Keep
I tried finding the comment box for your RDC post and failed miserably so I'm leaving it here...
Your post was fantastic! It could easily be the preface to mine but I'm hoping yours has a much happier ending.
I enjoyed how your words flowed and how the anxiety was heightened but with it, the comradery between the two women.
Staying within the word limit is a huge challenge...but you outsmarted & aced it!
Disqus (the comment program) can be a little touchy. :)
Thank you so much for reading. I love Ellie and was so excited to introduce a new character.
Sometimes Disqus (the comment program) can be a little touchy. :)
Thanks for going to another post to leave a comment! It would have been much easier to just "x" out.
Thank you too for your kind words. My favorite fiction is the sort that leaves me believing it could happen - no matter how unbelievable it is.
I didn't see the comment area for your RDC post, so I'm commenting here. I love the post about your dad, too, though! I love how your RDC post had a few different references related to water. Great story!
I've been having the toughest time with my commenting system lately. :P
Thanks, though, for finding a way. That's seriously awesome.
It made me cry..thanks! (yeah everyone knows it does not take a lot :)
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