Thursday, February 17, 2011

The Blouse

"Here we are," Henry said, throwing open the door to the airy bedroom.

I walked into the room and ran my fingers over the bumps of thread in the quilt laying across the bed. "Was it Kate's room?"

"No. She was down the hall across from my room. So this is okay? I didn't want you to feel..." he trailed off.

"It's perfect." I looked up to see him staring at me with a heated look. I fought the urge to jump in his arms.

"Right. Okay," taking a deep breath, Henry set my suitcase on the bed. "I'll just let you unpack."

Following him to the door, I watched him walk down the hall. As he disappeared down the stairs, I grinned. After two months of phone calls and emails, I was finally at the ranch for two golden weeks.

Humming under my breath I opened my suitcase and pulled out my clothes, carefully hanging them up. I smiled at the sight of my jeans and tops next to Henry's winter coats.

A glint caught my eye as I turned towards the bed. Curious, I looked deeper into the closet, moving until I saw the reflected bit of sunshine again. Reaching in, I pulled out a purple calico blouse with tiny pink flowers and pearl snaps. Giving it a quick shake, I coughed as dust flew in the air. Now, why on earth would there be a blouse in the closet?

Shrugging, I tossed it across a chair and finished unpacking. As I was pushing the suitcase into the closet, I heard Henry come down the hallway. Looking up, I saw him leaning against the doorway, a lecherous grin on his face, his eyes glued to my butt. I snapped to attention, blushing. "I'm all done!"

"Uh-huh."

"Um, how about checking out the barn?" I asked, willing my face to cool off.

"Right," he drawled, walking towards me.

"Oh! I found this." I tossed him the blouse. He caught it, the smile fading from his face.

"Where?"

"It was in the back of the closet." I gestured watching as his fingers ran lovingly over the buttons, his rough skin catching the soft cotton.

"Is it Kate's?"

"No," he said, looking up at me with a small, sad smile. "It was Georgie's."

"Who's Georgie?"

"My wife."

"You're married?!"

"Widowed. I thought you knew about Georgie," he said, confused.

"Oh God. I'm so - I didn't know." I swallowed the lump that lodged in my throat at the sadness I saw in his eyes. "How long?"

"Almost ten years now."

"How did she die?" I whispered.

"Cancer."

I sat down on the edge of the bed. He sat next to me and reached for my hand. I waited in silence while I watched dust motes dance in the sunlight beaming in from the window.

"We got married when we were eighteen. I'd known her all my life." He looked at me with a ghost of a grin. "I used to tease her nonstop. And then, one day, I stopped teasing and started loving. Our parents wanted us to wait until we graduated college, but we were in such a hurry to start our lives. We barely waited until we graduated high school."

I ran my fingers along his knuckles, listening to him talk about a girl with golden hair and cornflower blue eyes. He told me about their first years of marriage, living in a small apartment while going to school.

"She was diagnosed when she was twenty. We were scared but never thought that it'd kill her. And then, one morning, she left. Slipped right out of the room, with me and her mom and her dad sitting around her."

He tugged on one of my curls. I looked up into his solemn eyes as he wiped away my tears with his thumb.

"Ellie. I never thought to hide Georgie from you."

"I know."

"I loved her. I'll always love her, but," he leaned down and softly kissed my lips. "I've moved on with my life. I'm not a broken man."


This is a continuation of Henry and Ellie's story inspired by The Red Dress Club writing prompt: "Write a piece about finding a forgotten item of clothing in the back of a drawer or closet. Let us know how the item was found, what it is, and why it's so meaningful to you or your character."

If you haven't read the rest of Henry and Ellie's story, you can find it - wait! I have a brilliant idea! You can find it under the new tab heading above called "Fictional Mandyland". God, I'm good.

Critique is always welcome.

37 comments:

The JackB said...

"A ghost of a grin"- I like that.

Nancy C said...

I'm not sure why I find that "not a broken man" line so damn sexy, but I do.

I adore what you're doing here. You are really talented. Great take on the post.

Sighing happily. Just love work like this.

jessica said...

It's Henry and Ellie, yay, how I have missed them. "I stopped teasing and started loving".... my favorite line. Beautiful. Can you give them a mid week spot too? I'd rather not wait until next Friday.

Amy said...

I would read a book about Ellie & Henry! I want more, please ;D

Varunner7 said...

Ooooh, I really like this! I need to go read some more on Henry and Ellie!

Ratz said...

Oh so sad... I remember Henry and Ellie.... and i liked this new addition to their story...

my fave line: He looked at me with a ghost of a grin.

TamingInsanity said...

God, you are good. Are you putting this together for a book, woman?

Mrs. Jen B said...

Beautiful - now I have to go and catch up with the rest of the story!

Carrie said...

Ohhhh...this was so...I have tears. I love these two. I want it to work. I want them to be the kind of couple you aspire to be!

Love this! Keep going!!

Cheryl said...

I love these characters. I do. I love the interaction between them, and all the details and the twist.

One thing - if Kate was such a good friend, wouldn't Ellie know about this?

mandyland said...

That's troubled me too. I had more written out that kind of explained it. Basically. Georgie died ten years ago. Kate and Ellie have been friends for two years. Even if Kate mentioned it, Ellie might not have remembered because she didn't know Henry yet. Or once Kate knew they were talking to each other - if she knows yet - she might have assumed that Henry told the story. Either way, the length of time between Georgie's death and when Kate came into their lives might have made it something that wasn't mentioned.

At least that's what I'm going to say. Because I HATE plot holes. ;)

mandyland said...

I love them too. I just worry that I've made them too...perfect. Especially Henry. Then again, if I can't conjure a perfect man with words, what good is my imagination? lol

mandyland said...

Thank you! I'll just be keeping my fingers crossed that my links work. Always a hit and miss with me. :D

mandyland said...

Thanks! I wanted Henry to have baggage in the relationship too. Both he and Ellie have had pretty crazy heartbreaks and now that they have each other...they can truly move on.

mandyland said...

Thanks!

mandyland said...

And you can use my handy, dandy "Fictional Mandyland" tab. I'm quite proud.

mandyland said...

In the last few pieces of the story, Ellie was the more vulnerable one in the relationship. I wanted to give Henry's store more depth and let the reader know that his life isn't perfect.

Thank you for your kind words.

mandyland said...

LOL Sorry about that. Not really. :)

They are SO on the verge of something wonderful.

mandyland said...

You are too, too sweet, friend. I'm sure if I gave them a mid-week spot, people would be sick of them by March.

mandyland said...

That was MY favorite line! I wrote it and then sighed.

Maybe because there's nothing sexier than a man who recognized his grief, healed and then built from there?

mandyland said...

Thanks!

Lawmomma said...

This is so sweet. Just ... perfectly sweet.

Nichole said...

I absolutely love these characters.
And I adore your writing. The way you worded this line is amazing, "And then, one day, she left."
More, please!

Jennifer said...

Like everyone else I love these two, but I love them most because it's a love story of people who are a little older and little more seasoned by their lives. It makes their connection even more precious. Now I'd like to think I'm on top of it, but I was left wondering who Sara was.

(Florida) Girl with a New Life said...

I enjoyed this. Great descriptive language. I love his dialogue at the end. *swoon*

Karen Peterson said...

These are really great characters. Can't wait to read even more about them.

mandyland said...

Thanks! I'm going to keep writing and see where the story goes.

mandyland said...

Reason #54 why word limits suck.

So basically, I had to edit that all out. They were together but not "together" the weekend of the wedding. Then it's all long distance until he finally asks her to come to his ranch. He tells her that she'll have her own room. No pressure.

Now, the question is...will she use it? ;)

mandyland said...

Thank you! I linked them up under fiction to make finding them easier. :)

mandyland said...

Ooooooh! Aliens!!! He's an alien vampire cowboy! lol

mandyland said...

I didn't want him to be destroyed by his life, you know? I'm glad you liked it.

mandyland said...

Thank you!!

Time Crafted said...

Oh I am so going to have to read more of Henry & Ellie now! Great characters and you've got me wanting to read more !:>

mandyland said...

Thank you so much!

Amber @ The Mom Road said...

This was so sweet and so sad. I was captured by it all. Now I need to read more about these two.

mandyland said...

I like to think that there are good things in store. But to really tell a story, a real live story, I have to think of some sort of conflict.

mandyland said...

Oh I hope you enjoy the others too! I get such a kick when people like my fiction. (We all do, right? lol)