Monday, November 21, 2011

A Quiet Place

I kneel, the dampness of the verdant grass seeping through my pants. The sun warms the back of my arms, leeching deep through the cotton of my shirt and into my skin. I can feel it soak to my muscles, my bones, my heart.

A pair of bright gloves sit nearby. My bare hands dig deep as the loose soil works its way under my fingernails, coating my skin with a thick layer of earth. I push and prod, bringing order to chaos. The wind teases and pulls strands of hair across my cheeks, sticking to my lips. I brush at it with the back of my hand, leaving streaks of mud.

I sit up and stretch my back, the muscles tight and aching. I look up into the sky - sometimes blue, sometimes gray, sometimes dotted with white clouds. I peer around at what I've done, what I will do. Neatly lined beds of stone and wood with patches of green and brown mix with crimsons, purples, whites, and yellows. Their jumble laughs at my attempts at precision. Like mischievous children, they're where they shouldn't be, but I can't help but smile.

I bend back to my work as a pail of seed packets rustle in the breeze. Birds chirp. Cars pass. Children laugh. Water drips. And still...

It's silent.


This is in response to the Write on Edge prompt: write about a place that makes you feel peaceful. It's pretty obvious I need to get crackin' on my garden.

Like soon.

14 comments:

Kristina said...

That last paragraph and last line hit me like a ton of bricks - beautiful.

Cheryl said...

Sigh. This sounds so lovely. Especially knowing how much you love gardening. You captured your joy so beautifully. xo

Angela said...

Your love of gardening comes through so clearly here. I love the idea of the silence within the outdoor sounds that just fade into the background.

Debbie said...

Gardening. A language I speak. Thanks for a wonderful post. Makes me yearn to get my hands dirty especially since there is snow on the ground and spring is far away.

Galit Breen said...

Mandy, this is stunning! The details, the descriptions, every sense utilized. I was right there with you, getting muddy {said in the least weird possible way!}.

This is beautifully told!

MyLittleMiracles said...

Ohhh I immediately knew it was your garden! It's so beautiful! I wish you'd come down and help me with mine!

mandyland said...

Mine is currently unplanted and new. I'm hoping to bring it to life this year. And yes. We need a gardening, brownies, wine trip.

mandyland said...

Thank you so much! (And I took that in the least weird possible way.)

mandyland said...

I'm so lucky to be able to cheat and get my hands dirty even this late in the season. I don't think I could survive if there were snow on the ground preventing me from planting my "winter" crops.

mandyland said...

Thank you!

mandyland said...

Thanks, friend. I need so badly to start digging again. Maybe this weekend.

mandyland said...

Thank you!

lisa said...

This is so well written!  I knew what you were talking about without you having to say it!  I, personally, am not a fan of gardening, but I know  a ton of people that are.  They find it therapeutic.

Cameron (CDG) said...

I want to go there, too.

But I don't find that kind of peace in my garden. I envy you.