Stirring the sauce, I looked at the hot glass jars lined up with military precision. Their gaping mouths waiting to be filled with savory marinara. Dwarfed by the canning and cooking pots, a sauce pan of water bubbled merrily, sealing lids dancing along the bottom.
Behind me was carnage. Bowls of tomato pulp, stems and seeds lay bloody across the counter. The food mill, it's yawning mouth and jagged teeth dripping juice.
I looked at the clock, the tick a subtle beat marking the time. I'd been up for fourteen hours. I'd spent two in the field picking tomatoes and twelve processing them. This was the last batch before I cleaned the kitchen and called it a night. I arched my back, stretching the aching muscles. The timer went off.
My arms shook as I shifted and lifted. My feet throbbed as I moved across the tile floor. My mind was as foggy as the steam clouded room. Each motion, each movement was automatic.
The water bubbled up and over the side of the pot with a hiss as each jar was gently placed inside.
Pour, wipe, seal, submerge.
With a sigh, I watched the water cover the last jar. Placing a lid on the pot, I set the time and began to clean.
When I finished, I looked at the fruits of my labor: thirteen jars of marinara.
This post was inspired by the Write on Edge prompt: describe a moment in your life and bring us back the sensory treasures you found there, the feelings, scents, textures, sounds, tastes, and colorsI hope I succeeded. Let me know if I didn't. No. Seriously. I'm really working on description...not just adjectives.

9 comments:
this was beautifully described and what great, evocative use of language. Always a good day when you get to use the word carnage! :)
And I think it's a significant feat to have accomplished what you did in that one day!
This was wonderful. I could smell it, feel the sweat and the curling of hair. And the bloody, seedy bowls of tomato pulp was fantastic.
I think 14 hours of field to table (or Ball jar) is pretty darned significant.
I can appreciate the stretching of aching muscles, the shaking arms and throbbing feet.
I can't help but notice being too exhausted to gloat with pride at your accomplishment. Hell, I'm exhausted.
And btw, YUM!
When are we going to have a No Cal Canning Session??? (We'll just pretend I'm No Cal, okay?)
I liked the bloody imagery too. :)
Thank you. It felt more accomplished, I think. But still...so.much.work.
Wow, first of all, I am so impressed with the making of all that marinara. Secondly, you did an amazing job with the description, the carnage of the tomatoes, the heat and steam and exhaustion over the stove. Great job!
Ok my mouth is watering! You did such a spectacular job of describing that whole process, my back aches for you and my dinner tomorrow night.....pasta! Now umm, how much is a jar of your marinara sauce?
Such great use of language here. I especially love your description of the tomato-y carnage. I smiled as I read it because you described it so vividly.
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