Warning: Rated PG-13
"White or red?" Henry asked.
"White. Definitely white." I replied, carrying our plates to the table.
"Really? I thought you liked red."
"I do," I felt myself blushing.
"Interesting. Now, I have to know what's making you turn so pink."
"It's just that," I started, "you know how tequila can make some people lose their cool?"
"Yeah," Henry said slowly.
"Well, red wine is," I shifted my weight from one foot to the other, "red wine is not what I should be drinking if I want to keep my wits."
"We're not exactly playing chess," Henry teased. "We're having dinner."
"Red wine is dangerous," I hedged.
"This, I've got to hear."
"It's rich and deep and heavy," I explained, sinking into my thoughts. "The tannins fill your mouth, making it tingle. Your tongue comes to life, your lips go numb. It warms a path down your body tightening your fingers and toes. It's," I laughed uncertainly, returning to him, "dangerous."
Henry's eyes darkened. He deliberately pulled the cork out of the bottle of cabernet and filled a glass. Handing it to me, he rasped, "I like dangerous."
The look in his eyes made me take a half step back. Gulping a mouthful of wine, I stared at him warily. His eyes locked on my mouth. He stepped closer until his body was pressed to mine. He took the glass out of my hand and placed it on the table. Setting his hands on my hips, he lowered his head. "Dangerous can be fun," he murmured against my lips.
His mouth played across mine. His tongue teased and stroked until I melted into him. He wrapped one arm around my waist and cradled my head with his other hand. He trailed kisses across my cheek, down my jaw. I clung to his shoulders.
"Um...Henry...I'm not sure..."
He gently bit my earlobe, sending a shiver down through me. "It sure seems like a good idea to me." He walked me backwards, capturing me against the wall. His hands slid up, caressing the bare skin under my shirt.
"I thought," I gasped, as he filled his hand, "we...were..."
"Going to take it slow?" He shifted against me, his thigh sliding between mine. "Sweetheart, I can promise you I'll take it real slow."
"Your bed or mine?" I moaned.
He reached both hands to cup my butt and lifted me against him. "I don't think we're going to make it to the bed."
"I thought," I breathed, "you were," I worked his belt buckle free, "going to go slow."
He pulled at the buttons of my blouse. "Wait." Henry panted. "I don't have protection."
His words were like ice water. Unwrapping my legs from around his waist, I tried to stand.
"Actually, as long as you have a clean bill of health, you don't need to worry about it," I said, avoiding his eyes.
"What do you mean?" Henry frowned, his breaths coming slower as he lifted my chin with a finger.
I forced a smile to my face. "I can't have children, so you don't have to worry about getting me pregnant," I said lightly. I pulled the sides of my blouse together and tried to slide from between him and the wall.
Henry blocked my way with his arm. "Ellie," he whispered.
"I don't really want to talk about it," I swallowed. "Let's just forget about it, okay? I'm really hungry and that dinner smells great." I pushed his arm away. My fingers trembled as I buttoned my blouse.
Suddenly, that glass of wine sounded like a good idea. White this time.
This post was inspired by The Red Dress Club prompt: write about what your character wants most. This post takes place after The Blouse. It's a little complicated with Henry and Ellie. He wants her, she wants him, but what she really wants, she can't have.
If you want to read more about Henry and Ellie, click on Fictional Mandyland.
Special shout outs have to go to CDG, Ash and Kelly for all their help.
44 comments:
Holy mackrel! Girl.....I need to go get some water. Really really cold water. The end was sad, but the rest.....
Beautiful writing! The words you choose match the tone of the moment perfectly - very seductive then a sudden stop. I almost blushed as I read this at work!
Very sensual. I was holding my breath while reading. That's a good sign right?
Beautiful writing! The words you choose match the tone of the moment perfectly - seductive and then a sudden stop. I almost blushed reading this at work!
My heart hurst for Ellie. I can understand that want and desire that seems hard or impossible to achieve.
What a scene! Sexy. Well done.
I felt that cold splash of water! I was just wondering how far this scene could go in just 600 words and... sploosh!
You sure know how to write hot! :> And then splash on the cold water. I could feel Ellie's longing and her attempt to hide it at the end. You definitely have a novel here, Mandy!
So, having had a sneaky peek of this, it was both thrilling and awful to see where you took it, and how cleverly you offered up Elli's secret wants.
Oh, Mandy, this was GREAT! Loved all the sexual tension - and then I could feel how trapped she felt at the moment, against that wall.
Really well done!
So beautifully written! And right at the height of everything my heart went from racing to stopped and then it broke! Well done!
Whew! What a ride, or almost! You did such a great job of creating an emotional roller coaster here, for them both. I was with you very step of the way and felt myself chill from the sexual heat as soon as the protection line was dropped.
So, so good!
Hello Henry! Great job!!!
Wow.
After the cold shower, I'll attempt to put some coherent thought together.
Wow.
I love this, Mandy, you are so talented. It's also making me wonder about my recent switch from being a red to a white wine drinker...maybe it's just my advanced age!
Love it my love! I would have totally gone with Pinot noir though ;)
XO - your dialogue talent STILL leaves me in awe.
Wow. Totally hot. I love it.
Pass the wine.
Is boom chicka wow wow an appropriate comment?
Wowsers lady- *loved* this! It was the perfect up and down.
Also? It was hot! :)
Yes, yes, YES!
That is what I'm talking about!
The changes made it perfect, and you steamed it up.
I'll never be able to drink white wine the same way And I'm a white wine girl myself. At least I was. Now I have to reconsider!
So, so well written.
H. O. T. hot! wow, great job ... oh and your secret wanting twist was perfect!
I loved it. It was jusr perfection, the dialouge, the images , the heat and the dousing of that fire. You "wowed" me again.
I'm going to need a bottle of red and some Henry to go please!
LOVE the twist at the end and I too felt like I got splashed w/ ice water.
WELL DONE, my friend!
BTW, I may have read this like 5 times. Or more.
Did you have to get ice water? lol
Uh-oh. I hope it wasn't too much. I really had fun writing it.
I think so. I'm pretty sure, at least.
Thank you!
Thanks!
Indeed I did. You're getting scary good at this. :)
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The funny thing is...I'm actually right on 600 words. I didn't think I'd be ablet to make it happen.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I have a feeling everyone thought it was going to go a different direction. Actually, I kinda thought it was going to go a bit differently.
Thank you!!
Thanks, friend. :)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Isn't Henry delicious?
HAHAHA! Yeah. I had to go take one myself.
Uh-oh. You might need to switch back to red. ;)
Pinot Noir or a Shiner. Such a tough choice. ;)
No. Kidding.
Totally appropriate. It was the soundtrack playing in my head. lol
Thanks so much for your help, friend.
Go ahead...switch to red. :D
Thank you so much. That means a lot.
No worries. I may have read it a dozen times. Or more. For editing purposes, of course.
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