Thursday, June 30, 2011

The Letter

Henry opened his desk drawer and pulled out a small, wooden box. Placing it on his desk, he opened the gold latch and stared at the folded piece of paper nestled amongst dried rose petals and a wedding band.

Gingerly opening the page, he stared at the splotched ink and limp corners. Light peeked through the creases, folded and refolded so many times. He read the words he had memorized.

"My dearest Hankie,

I know you hate being called Hankie, but I hated being called Squirt, and still you called me that until you started calling me Baby. Besides, you'll only read this after my death, so deal with it."

Henry grinned. Even years later, he could still hear Georgie's voice.

"You're downstairs right now, talking to Mama and Dad. I know you think I'm going to beat this thing, but I have to tell you, baby, I don't think I will. I don't know how to explain it, but I have a feeling that I'm not going to celebrate our tenth anniversary. I'm not sure I'll make it to our fifth.

I'm scared. You have to know that. Remember when I was eight and you boys dared me to jump off the rock at Big Falls? Remember how scared I was? I didn't want to be called chicken, but I didn't want to jump either. Do you remember what you did?

You walked up to me and said, "Hey, Squirt. I'll jump with you." You held my hand and we jumped together. That's the day I fell in love with you.

I know I'll be holding your hand when I make this jump. But when I hit the water, I won't be with you. That scares me so much. I just have to have faith that I'll see you again someday.

In the meantime, I have a couple things I want to make sure you remember.

Now, don't be stupid after I go. You're young, hot and will make some other woman a great husband. Just don't rush in too fast, okay? Go slow and find an amazing woman who I'd be proud to call friend.

But make sure she can't cook. I want to have one thing over her. okay? I don't think that's asking too much.

And, baby, keep an eye on Gage, will you? This is going to be harder on him than it is on you. Maybe it's a twin thing, but I know this could destroy him. I worry about him, but would feel a whole lot better if I knew you were there to make sure he doesn't do something he'll regret.

I love you, Hankie. I wish that I could have given you babies and raised them on your parents' ranch. I wish that we could have had more laughter, more fights, more loving, more time. Just a little more time. A decade or two. Or maybe three. What can I say? I'm greedy.

But that's not to be and I need to find peace with it. So do you. So love me. Love me forever. But don't let that stop you from loving someone else.

I hear you coming back upstairs. You're hollering that you're bringing some of Mama's pie. Thank you for taking care of me, baby. No woman has ever felt so loved.

I'll be watching over you with all my love,

Georgie"

Henry carefully refolded the letter and looked at the headline spread across his computer screen, "Local Hero Wounded in Raid". Picking up the phone, he dialed.

"Gage. It's Henry. I was wondering if I could ask you a favor." Henry paused, knowing Gage would never say no. "I need help at Hidden Hollow. Just for a few months. It's complicated."



This fictional post was inspired by the Red Dress Club writing prompt: You or your character find a forgotten letter or card from someone important in your life--whether good or bad. What does it say? How does it affect you or your character? What is done with it?

This post takes place just before last week's Coming Home. I hope it give you a little more insight to Gage and Henry.

For more on the Hidden Hollow series, (nice name, no?) visit Fictional Mandyland and catch up.

36 comments:

MyLittleMiracles said...

I love how she wants him to move on, but even in death she is holding on to that one thing....cooking! I can't wait to see what is in store with Gage!

Tim@sogeshirts said...

Wow your writing Mandy was so good that I really got sad reading this. Felt like Henry was a real person who lost the love of his life. 

Karen @ Time Crafted said...

I opened this up just as soon as it went live.  But, I've been waiting until I got through everything else that needed to be done tonight.  And for the quiet.  I wanted the quiet so I could go to Fictional Mandyland uninterrupted.

And now, I know exactly where it is I'm going to in this quiet.  I'm visiting Hidden Hollow.  I like it.  (Aw damn, now I've got that annoying chant from the football bleachers, "I like it, I love it, I want more of it." stuck running through my head!  Annoying, for sure, but still, kinda sorta most certainly true. lol)

You know what else I like?  Georgie.  Love the part about Henry needing to find a woman, just one who can't cook.  Love that ninety-five percent of the story was about Henry & Georgie, but now we know so much more about Gage.  And love the description of the paper with the light coming through the holes at the folds from being opened, read, and closed over and over.

Yup, waiting for everyone to be in bed was well worth it! :>

Eden E said...

This made me tear up, so sweet and somehow... real. I LOVE that you had her use his lame nickname that he hates and then refer to it. I REALLY love that you show us a tiny bit of the pain that would be eating up any wife inside if she were dying young, when she asks that he find someone who can't cook. Ouch this is making my throat choke up again! Must. Stop. Thinking, about, Georgie! OK I'll think about what's going to happen with Gage instead. :) Thank you for writing this, you are a super cool lady, and excellent writer. 

CDG said...

Mandy, I know I gush a lot. But this? This is some of the best I've read of you. This letter strikes exactly the right tone, tugs at the heartstrings, and intros a character beautifully.

So, I think my gushing is maybe justified.

Lindsay said...

I'm not supposed to cry at work, Mandy. That wasn't fair. I just love the way this story is developing. I can't wait to read your book. I'm going to be waiting at the store for midnight release, lady!

Mrs. Jen B said...

Crying.  Crying, crying, crying.  This was so beautiful. 

Kir said...

I'm with CDG, this is so good. I read it 4 times just trying to find my favorite line or emotion and I still can't decide. This is one of the best things you've written and that's saying something since everything you write is Phenomenal.

Pepca said...

Wonderful to get to know more about Henry and Gage. I loved how she tried to stay courageous and funny. Beautifully written!

Klbubert said...

Ok is this book finished yet? I am dying to sit down and read it cover to cover not in bits and pieces. Although you have my curiosity spiked. Great job with the writing!  Of course, I have always loved  your writing!

Carrie said...

I think this is one of my favorites from you. It reads so well and rings so true. It's simple and clean writing.

Angela said...

Oh, tears.  Poor Hankie.

And Gage...after his brief intro, I'm pretty excited to find out more about him.

Jennifer said...

I love how with each installment the layers build and the complications tangle. This made me sad for Henry's now, because I worry that he has taken those words to heart and actually isn't able to love in the way I want him to, which is even more tragic than his loss, and Georgies. And I agree that the letter was perfectly constructed with grief, joy, regret, love and information.

This was really a fantastic piece of writing Mandy. Really, really.

My Pajama Days said...

Oh Mandy - I got teary eyed and I don't even know these characters yet. That letter told such an intimate story and gave them both depth. I am going to have to go back and read the previous installments!

Renee said...

I'm going to have to go back and reread some and read some I've missed. So well done!

Julie Gardner said...

Wow.  Just wow.

Cheryl said...

I am all teary and upset! What a beautiful letter, it seemed so real. And I love this new info about Henry and how Gage fits into all this. Really lovely, Mandy!!

Mad Woman said...

Love.
Love the real voice in this letter. She sounds like someone I would have liked to call a friend.
And "Hankie"...so endearing.

Little Gumnut said...

I really enjoyed all the hints you put in the letter to their story, not revealing all but painting a great picture and leaving people wondering...

mandyland said...

It shows, a bit, how young she is.

mandyland said...

Thank you so much, Tim. That really means a lot to me.

mandyland said...

I'm so glad you enjoyed this!

mandyland said...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Georgie is really so much a part of Henry and Gage's stories...

mandyland said...

Thank you, friend. So very much.

mandyland said...

LOL You might be the only one there. :)

mandyland said...

Thank you!

mandyland said...

Wow! Thank you so much!

mandyland said...

It really does share a lot about the two men, doesn't it?

mandyland said...

Thank you so much, hon. And don't worry. If anyone ever publishes it, you'll get an autographed (HA!) copy.

mandyland said...

Thank you!

mandyland said...

He's going to be an interesting addition...

mandyland said...

Thank you so much. And yeah...Henry has some things coming up...

mandyland said...

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

mandyland said...

Thanks!

mandyland said...

They're so much a part of a puzzle. :)

mandyland said...

After I wrote the letter, I was actually a little sad that she was dead.

Hmmm...zombies? Vampires? Ghosts?